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Craft and Critique Workshop Sunday, Nov. 2nd

This workshop promises to be exciting as we’ll be using our first half of the workshop trying our hand (or for those who’ve done this before, dazzling us) at flash fiction!  Mark your calendars now, this is one not to miss!

Date: Sunday, November 2, 2008
Time: Noon to 3:00PM (Note the time change)
Place: Chico Branch of the Butte County Library
Addy: 1108 Sherman Avenue (cross of First Ave.), Chico 
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12:00 Noon – 1:00 PM Craft Workshop
We’ll be trying out a workshop using flash fiction where writers are given a topic to write on for a few minutes and then discuss. This should be a very fun activity!
     After the exercise, we’ll discuss the focus of the writing exercise, a specific element of the craft of writing. A sure winner for all genres of fiction!

1:00 – 3:00 PM Critique Workshop
Manuscripts need to be submitted to [kathie dot blog at gmail dot com] on or before noon Saturday October 25, 2008 and will be distributed to members who have attended meetings consistently and are in good standing. If you plan on attending but have not done so previously, you may request a copy be available to you when you arrive, however, we will not be distributing manuscripts to non-members for privacy and copyright purposes.
For more information, contact the organizer, Kathie Leung (pronounced Lee-young) at 521-4264 or [kathie dot blog at gmail dot com].

RSVPs requested! (You may use the "comment" link below to RSVP.  Just please be sure to provide a valid email address.  RSVP comments and general inquiry comments are not published and email addresses are never published.)

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Craft and Critique Workshop

Event Info
Host: Chico Writer’s Group
Type:MeetingsClub/Group Meeting

Time and Place
Date: Sunday, October 19, 2008
Time: 2:00pm – 5:00pm

Location: Butte County Library – Chico Branch Meeting Room (across from circulation desk)
Street: 1108 Sherman Avenue
City/Town: Chico, CA
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Contact Info
Phone: 521-4264
Email: kathie dot blog at gmail dot com

Description

2:00 – 2:30 PM Review "Tense" Writing Exercise & Discuss
Writing exercise: Write a scene that incorporates the character’s past, present, and future.

2:30 – 3:00 PM Craft Workshop: Tense
Tenses make us all tense sometimes. How do you talk about the past, the present, and the future? How do you talk about the future from the past or the farther past from the past? We’ll look at how to do all of this without losing your mind.

3:00 – 5:00 PM Critique Manuscript(s).
Short manuscripts (2-5 pages) may be brought to the critique workshop with sufficient number of copies to distribute to members.

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Craft and Critique Workshop Topic: Dialogue

Time and Place
Date: Sunday, September 21, 2008
Time: 2:00pm – 5:00pm
Location: Upper Crust Bakery & Cafe
Street: 130 Main Street
City/Town: Chico, CA
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Contact Info
Phone:530.521.4264
Email:kathie dot blog at gmail dot com

Description

NOTE: Location is tentative. Please check back with us prior to the meeting for the exact location. It would be helpful to have a firm headcount (please don’t say you’ll be there if there’s a good possibility you won’t be) by Thursday, September 18th.

AGENDA
2:00 PM Craft Workshop: Dialogue

Writing exercise:
     Write a conversation between two characters where they are both lying. Never directly state that they are untruthful; instead write it so the reader figures out the characters are lying exclusively from the dialogue.

Give it a go and bring your finished product with you (preferably with a few copies) to share with the others and talk about what hurdles you may have come across, what doors you might have opened and other writer chit-chat sort of things.

2:30 PM Craft Chat
A CWG member will be giving an informative presentation on the topic of dialogue:
     "Effective dialogue moves the plot forward, reveals character and punches up conflict and tension. So how does a writer shape dialogue to sound more real life? Our craft chat will explore various strategies in writing compelling dialogue."

3:00 PM Critique Workshop
Two manuscripts will be critiqued by the group. Lead critiquers will have been assigned prior to the meeting to help move the discussion along. (Note: Manuscripts will only be sent to members in good standing, meaning you must have attended at least one Meet & Greet session and/or a writer’s group meeting. If you have not, you are still very welcome to attend AND participate!)
     For more information, more writing prompts, information about contests and upcoming meetings, please browse this website or leave us a comment.

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Reminder: Manuscripts Due

Just a reminder to all Chico Writer’s Group members that manuscripts are due by noon Saturday, September 13th for our Sunday, September 21st meeting. 

Manuscripts should be emailed to ‘Kathie dot blog at gmail dot com’ in (listed in order of preference) *.doc, *.txt/*.rtf, or *.pdf format (note: you can download an Adobe Document Reader free by going to adobe.com). 

If there is anything in particular you wish the group to look for or would prefer not to have commented upon, please include that in the body of your email. 

Manuscript Formatting:

  • Include the author’s name, date of the critique and include page numbers whenever possible. 
  • Use a serif font such as Times New Roman or Courier (helps differentiate between lower case L’s and uppercase i’s).
  • Be no more than 10 pages (screenplays and plays may be longer) in length.
  • Double space when able (preferred as it allows the critiquers to make comments).

The Lead Critiquers will be assigned when the manuscripts are forwarded to all members.  If you are not planning to attend or there’s a possibility you won’t be able to attend the entire meeting, please make sure you notify Kathie immediately so as to prevent confusion when the leads are assigned.  Only members in good standing are eligible for lead critique slots.

Member in Good Standing: A member whom has regularly attended meetings and has participated in the critique portion of the workshop.

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About the Chico Writer’s Group

Write On!Contact: Kathie Leung (lee-young)
530 521-4264
Kathie dot blog at gmail dot com

Chico Writer’s Group
Agenda

2:00 PM
Creative Writing Exercise

Members will be invited to share and discuss their assigned writing exercise. Exercises are posted prior to each session on the website: ejourn.net/cwg

2:30 PM
Craft Chat

Led by a CWG Member we will explore various elements of writing, focusing on one specific area at each session.

3:00 – 5:00 PM
Critique Workshop

Manuscripts received by the deadline (12PM Pacific Time 8 days prior to upcoming meeting) will be assigned a Critique Leader and discussed in the order received.  Of course, manuscripts left from previous workshop take priority.  For critique guidelines, format, etc. please review the brochure’s interior or visit us online at www.ejourn.net/cwg for further info.

Please note: Sometimes we will be reading and discussing adult themes which might include graphic violence, adult situations and language, and sexual situations.  Therefore all members are required to be 18 years or older.  We encourage you to leave children home.

Welcome
     The Chico Writer’s Group first met in January of 2008.  It was founded by Kathie Leung, whose desire was to bring into the community, a forum where other writers could meet on a consistent basis and help one another sharpen and hone their talents.
     The purpose of the group is to provide a warm, welcoming environment where writers of all levels of skill, format (essay, short story, novel, poetry, prose, playwright, screenplay, etc.) and genre (children’s, young adult, fiction, fan-fic, chick lit, sci-fi, fantasy, etc.) can share craft tips, develop skills through writing exercises and critique one another’s work in a safe, friendly, non-threatening environment.

Meetings
     The following is the schedule for meetings throughout the fall and beginning of winter, 2008 and are subject to change.  To be notified of changes, please contact Kathie Leung at 521-4264 or "kathie dot blog at gmail dot com".

All meetings are from 2 – 5 p.m.
Locations: To Be Announced

Sunday, September 21st
Saturday, October 5th
Saturday, October 25th
Saturday, November 8th
Sunday, November 16th
Sunday, November 30th
Sunday, December 14th
Saturday, December 27th

National Novel Writing Month Write-Ins are scheduled throughout the month of November. For more information, please contact Kathie.

Membership: Dues & Responsibilities
     There are presently no dues for membership, or rather, there are no financial obligations.  As a member, we do expect you to fully participate – especially in the area of critiques.  Members should be periodically submitting a manuscript for critiquing and always should be participating in critiquing the work of others in order to be considered a member in good standing.  Writing exercises are encouraged, but not required. 
     Unless previously arranged or extenuating, unforeseen circumstances arise, as a member you are expected to arrive on time with copies of your writing exercise and the assigned critique manuscripts. 
Manuscripts for critiquing purposes should have been read at least twice and have editing marks and comments written on the printed out copy. 
     Once the critique is finished, members are required to return their edited copy to the writer.  Please write your name and phone number and/or email address at the top, right corner of the manuscript so if the writer has any questions, they may contact you for further clarification. 
     If you have a piece that’s being critiqued, you should bring a copy of your work with you and possibly an extra copy should anyone forget to bring one or we have a guest attending.

Writing Exercises
     Prior to each meeting, we will assign a writing exercise which correlates to the upcoming Craft Chat topic.  The exercise will be posted online at our website with ample time to complete the exercise.  If you do not have regular access to the Internet and are unable to download the upcoming exercise, please notify Kathie to have your name added to an update email notification list and the prompt will be emailed to you after online publication.
     The purpose of these exercises is to help you, as a writer, explore areas and elements of the craft that you may have not considered before, haven’t spend time developing or merely strengthen what skills you already have.
      Take your time and give it a try.  There are no right or wrong ways to complete the exercise.  Be sure to print out a copy and bring it with you to the next meeting to share with others and discuss how the exercise may have changed how you look at your writing, what doors may have opened, what hurdles you jumped … or even came upon!

Craft Chat
    
Each session will include a 30-minute presentation given by a member about a specific element involved in writing.  If you have a particular interest you’d like to explore, please let us know.  Likewise, if there is a topic you would like to present, drop Kathie a line and we’ll explore that further!

Critique Workshop
      The meat and potatoes of our group is the critique workshop.  This gives writers the opportunity to receive invaluable feedback on their writing.  Whether you are planning on taking your work to publication, submit it for a contest or merely work on strengthening your skills while honing your talents, the critique workshop is a must. 
      We do have specific guidelines as a writer submitting a manuscript for critiquing, as a leader of the critique and as a reader.  As well, we have certain “rules” designed to make the experience enjoyable, productive and rewarding for everyone.  Along with this brochure you will find a handout on our critiquing process, guidelines, rules and so forth.  On our website you will find several links in the navigation column that will further provide you with useful information about editing, proofing, reading for content and more.  If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to ask!

Manuscript Guidelines
The following is a checklist of manuscript format guidelines.

  • Font size 10 to 12 point
  • Font face: Times New Roman, Serif fonts, Arial
  • One and a half to double spaced lines
  • One inch margins all around
  • Pages numbered
  • Name, phone number and/or email address on title/first page
  • File should be saved in (listed in order of preference):
    *.doc
    *.rtf or *.txt
    *.PDF
    Note: If you are unable to open any of the files noted above, please contact "kathie dot blog at gmail dot com" and provide a list of files you are able to open.  If you do not presently have an Adobe Reader, you can download one for free by visiting Adobe.com.

For the purposes of critiquing and time constraints, manuscripts are to be 5 to 10 pages in length.  They may be portions of a longer piece and do not necessarily have to be from the beginning of the greater work.  For shorter pieces including poems and prose, you may submit more than one per session, however if you choose to submit several short pieces, please do so in one file format so all are included at the same time in the critique, otherwise the remainder will be placed into queue.
     Manuscripts are to be submitted via email to Kathie by noon Pacific Time no less than 8 days prior to upcoming meeting.  Members will receive their attached copies via email by 5:00 pm with specific instructions in the body of the email, provided they have attended meetings previously and are in good standing. 
     We operate on a “first come, first serve” basis.  While we restrict submissions to 8 days prior to an upcoming meeting, you may submit as early as you like.

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Craft & Critique Workshop: Place & Setting

Event Info
Host: Chico Writer’s Group (Link leads to our Facebook Club page where members can RSVP. *)
Time and Place
Date: Sunday, September 7, 2008
Time: 2:00pm – 4:00pm
Location: Empire Coffee Shop
Street: 434 Orange Street
City/Town: Chico, CA
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Contact Info
Please use the comment form below and be certain to use a valid address so that we may respond.  Your email address will not be published.

Meeting Info
If you’re new to the group, please come by at 1:00 p.m. where you can have the chance to meet us, ask any questions you might have and share with us a bit about you.

2:00 PM Share and discuss writing exercise
     Exercise will be published on here when the information becomes available and will be sent out to current members with the reminder email.

Note: Writing exercise from our meeting 8/16 may be worked on, but for time and space considerations, if you’d like to share and discuss, please do so via email or after the meeting Sunday.

2:30 PM Craft Chat: Topic is Place and Setting
     The specifics will be published here when it becomes available. Current members will receive an email with the information prior to the meeting.

3:00 PM Critiques
     Currently R. will be leading the critique of Kathie’s piece from 8/16 (manuscripts will only be shared between current members for privacy and copyright concerns)
     Members wishing to have their work critiqued must email it to Kathie by Sunday, August 31st. The earlier, the better as this allows members ample time to read and make notes for the discussion. If you require more information regarding our guidelines, please refer to the following articles:

Also, please refer to the links in the navigation column here on this site for useful information.

*About Facebook Club Page:  If you aren’t a member of Facebook, consider joining.  It’s free and a great way to keep abreast of upcoming events, activities and other features of the Chico Writer’s Group.  There are two Chico Writer’s Group pages online at Facebook.  Make sure you are adding to the CLUB and not the FAN page as the FAN page will most likely be closed down in the very near future.  Once you’ve added the club page, navigate to the Administrator (Kathie) and add yourself as a friend (maybe add a comment you’re a new member of the writer’s group) so that you are receiving invitations. 

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Craft & Critique Workshop Sat. August 16th

Location: Empire Coffee Shop, Orange Street
Time: 9:00-10:30A.M.
Date: Saturday, August 16th, 2008
RSVP: kathie dot blog at gmail dot com or 530-521-4264
Guests: Open to anyone in the Chico/Paradise/Oroville/Hamilton City/Orland area (or those who can make it to our meeting place!)
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9:00 – 9:30 AM Share and Discuss Assigned Writing Exercise: (Either email a copy to everyone, be prepared to read outloud or bring enough copies for everyone. Contact Kathie for further information and instructions.)

“Character: Write a scene using no physical characteristics to describe a character or characters. Give them movement, dialogue, reactions, but don’t tells us what they look like. How much depth do you get from what it is they say and do?” (from Word Ferret)

9:30 – 10:00 AM Craft Chat: Character

Many craft books and teachings for novice writers suggest a list of questions to answer before writing character. You have seen these questions: What’s the character’s eye color? Where was he born? Hobbies? What’s in his pockets? These answers do not deepen character as real character exploration hasn’t yet occurred. Your goal is to create a character who is real. So what is a better way to think of character? There are a different set of questions that can better draw you into the character’s life. We will explore these.

10:00 – 10:30 AM Manuscript Critique: Manuscript from R. A. S. (please contact Kathie at: kathie dot blog at gmail dot com to request a copy of the manuscript if you have not already received it.) Critique will be lead by Kathie whom will use the following Critique Worksheet (please use this sheet to help guide the critique):

Author Name / Title of Piece
Concept (Scope/Originality)
Plot (Conflict/Crisis/Resolution)
Characterization (Action/Appearance/Thought)
Dialog (Tension/Rhythm/Diction)
Setting (Time and Place/Concrete Detail)
Tone (Language/Style)
Additional Comments

Note: You can download this form by going [here].

This meeting is open to anyone who can physically attend. If you are out of the area but still interested in a writing group, please contact Kathie at kathie.blog@email.com.

UPDATED Wednesday, August 13, 2008 at 8:46 AM & 4:03 PM, link to form added 8/14/08 at 9:39 AM

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Chico Writer’s Group Critique Workshop Sat. June 14th

Location: Empire Coffee Shop, Orange Street
Time: 9:30-11:30A.M.
Date: Saturday, June 14th, 2008
RSVP: kathie dot blog at gmail dot com or 530-521-4264 by Thursday, June 12th, 2008
Guests: Open to anyone in the Chico/Paradise/Oroville/Hamilton City/Orland area (or those who can make it to our meeting place!)
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New Format!

9:30 – 10:00 AM
Share and Discuss Assigned Writing Exercise: (Either email a copy to everyone, be prepared to read outloud or bring enough copies for everyone.  Contact Kathie for further information and instructions.)

“Create a narrative voice that is distinctly different from your own by changing a key element of the character. If you’re a woman, write in a man’s voice. If you’re under thirty, create the voice of a character over sixty. Make a change in appearance or education or background.”

10:00 – 10:30 AM Craft Chat: Voice

Each writer has a distinct personality. Hemingway, for example, would never write like Mark Twain. How does a writer develop her/his voice? What is the difference between voice and style? A writer must master narrative voice. How is it done, and what exactly is it? A story’s voice is created by some fundamental tools a writer must have in their “writer’s toolbox.” We will discuss these and look at how this all works.

10:30 – 11:30 AM Manuscript Critique: Piece by Kathie Leung [download copy here].  Critique will be lead by N. D. Austin whom will use the following Critique Worksheet (please use this sheet to help guide the critique):

Author Name / Title of Piece
Concept (Scope/Originality)
Plot (Conflict/Crisis/Resolution)
Characterization (Action/Appearance/Thought)
Dialog (Tension/Rhythm/Diction)
Setting (Time and Place/Concrete Detail)
Tone (Language/Style)
Additional Comments

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Critique Group Sat. May 17th

Chico Writer’s Group Critique Workshop

Location: Empire Coffee Shop, Orange Street
Time: 9:30-11:30A.M.
Date: Saturday, May 17th, 2008
RSVP: kathie dot blog at gmail dot com or 530-521-4264 by Monday, May 12th, 2008
Guests: Open to anyone in the Chico/Paradise/Oroville/Hamilton City/Orland area (or those who can make it to our meeting place!)
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Critique Group Sat. Apr. 26th

Chico Writer’s Group Critique Workshop
Location: Empire Coffee Shop, Orange Street
Time: 9:30-11:30A.M.
Date: Saturday, April 26th, 2008
RSVP: kathie dot blog at gmail dot com or 530-521-4264 by Monday, April 7th, 2008
Guests: Open to anyone in the Chico/Paradise/Oroville/Hamilton City/Orland area (or those who can make it to our meeting place!)
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